http://directorhrjobs.com/do-you-think-the-following-e-mail-conveying-verbosely-please-make-it-better-if-possible/ Human Resource Director Jobs Thu, 17 Feb 2011 02:02:34 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.1 http://directorhrjobs.com/do-you-think-the-following-e-mail-conveying-verbosely-please-make-it-better-if-possible/comment-page-1/#comment-1627 idiom Tue, 18 Aug 2009 21:20:17 +0000 http://directorhrjobs.com/do-you-think-the-following-e-mail-conveying-verbosely-please-make-it-better-if-possible/#comment-1627 There needs a semi-colon after 'plant' as you are changing the subject 'Throughout their shifts' would suffice Responsibility does not become entrusted as trust is a prerequisite of the aforementioned. It gets worse. Are you selling Nigerian Lottery tickets There needs a semi-colon after ‘plant’ as you are changing the subject
‘Throughout their shifts’ would suffice
Responsibility does not become entrusted as trust is a prerequisite of the aforementioned.
It gets worse.
Are you selling Nigerian Lottery tickets

]]>